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The big news is here.

I have never been to a theater alone. I am very introverted in some parts. Especially doing alone is difficult for me. The reason is that I have two sisters and I always accompany them. Sometimes, I hear that you need to make your own choice. So, today, I was going to a theater without any colleagues. The movie was spider-man: No Way Home. I was impressed by many things which let me break my paradigm. I cried three times while watching the movie. I love Tomholland. I want to watch the film. There are diverse dimensions in the world and embody some larger outlook and notion.

Spider-man (a.k.a, Tomholland) is ways, my friend.


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The big news is here.

I have never been to a theater alone. I am very introverted in some parts. Especially doing alone is difficult for me. The reason is that I have two sisters and I always accompany them. Sometimes, I hear that you need to make your own choice. So, today, I was going to a theater without any colleagues. The movie was spider-man: No Way Home. I was impressed by many things which let me break my paradigm. I cried three times while watching the movie. I love Tomholland. I want to watch the film. There are diverse dimensions in the world and embody some larger outlook and notion.

These sentences are correct. 


Spider-man (a.k.a, Tomholland) is ways, my friend.

Spider-man (a.k.a, Tomholland) is always, my friend.


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